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Girl with a feather

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Bring to me all of my arrows
Bring to me my crossbow too
I fear we might need them both
Before the night is through

Once a world of glittering hope
This world is not the world we knew
The only light left to shine
Is between me and you
Blackmore's Night


I want to dedicate this one to =Sylwiaa because she's so nice to me :heart: Thank you dear for helping me with choosing stocks for this one! :hug:


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=Falln-Stock [link] | *liam-stock [not available] | ~Falln-Brushes [not available] | ~trisste-brushes [link] [link] | sxc.hu [not available]
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Out of your hole gallery, I found this the most appealing to me. I absolutely adore how the dress fabric starts to overlap one piece over another, Like maybe she was not the richest woman in the country, or any other place. The feather is also a beautiful touch.
The colours are also amazing. Like it's a gothic scene and no bright lights are involved.

The only things I may suggest are;
The title,"Girl with a feather" Seems a little bit too plain for my liking. Be creative! In your Artist's comments, you put a short poem..,You could try using words like " Blackmore's Night", or something else out of this world!

The other thing I suggest is the expression on her face. It somewhat looks like she's smiling. Make her expression look serious, and that she's really concentrating on what she's aiming for.

Other than those two things, I see nothing else! Absolutely amazing. I can't wait to see more from you. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Keep up the great work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>